Once there's
a girl who is afraid to mingle with others. She is always alone and quiet. One
day, a girl talked to her. They became friends and they were always. Her friend
introduced a friend of hers, a boy. Because of that, they started knowing each
other. After days, weeks and months, they became super best friends.
Avoid repetition of paragraphs and it is incomplete..
ReplyDeleteThe story was meaningful but the story was short. You can add more ^^
ReplyDeleteThe story is very short
ReplyDeleteThe story is very short. Try to add more information.^^V
ReplyDeleteThe story is short but its cute...hahahhahaha
ReplyDeleteWahahahaha. Thanks for the comments! ;)
ReplyDeleteits nice and short but the story is straight forward. try to add more scenes :3
ReplyDeleteThe story is too short and almost the same with the story of Ma'am Tenny. There was a part that I was confused.
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ReplyDeleteI think you should add more but it's good ^^
ReplyDeleteThanks guys! :D
ReplyDeletegood.....very good
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